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October 18, 2012
By lizpaula DIAMOND, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
lizpaula DIAMOND, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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It was the heavy breathing
i think
that I liked the most
our mouths made no movement
as our faces dried
and sternums rocked
planted kisses in a chalk line
wet florettes on my chest
pretended to worry
about potential marks on my neck
but so gently you bit
in a aggressive manner
heart rate risen
resulted in the breathing



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on Oct. 28 2012 at 1:13 pm
lizpaula DIAMOND, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
73 articles 6 photos 9 comments
woww, thank you alot :D

on Oct. 28 2012 at 2:09 am
didyou_notice_007 BRONZE, Wasilla, Alaska
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Hi. I really like this. I love how it says about the breathing in the beginging and then wraps it up in the end with "-resulted in the breathing". Love it. Good job!


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