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Across The Room

October 4, 2012
By HankThePigeon SILVER, Wyndmoor, Pennsylvania
HankThePigeon SILVER, Wyndmoor, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have promise to keep and miles to go before i sleep- Robert Frost


You there
I have something to tell you

I want to tell you that you look beautiful
Don't look down at your feet
I can't see the gems in your eyes

I want to tell you about your hair
It's so shiny I might go blind
Don't tie it up, let it be free

I want to tell you about your smile
It lights up the room when you show it
Don't hide it away, share it with the world

I want to tell you about your outfit
Its so cute I might cry
Don't stand in the corner, show it off to us

You there across the room

Listen to me



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on Oct. 9 2012 at 4:40 pm
DemonAngel GOLD, Maricopa, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
You are either dead or alive.Your heart either pumps blood or life.Our hearts pump words love life and understanding.Into our sub-conscience body for we use the hands of that body to write. -Best friend :'( RIP

yes cuz i am the girl in the shadow in the corner in the dark and its poetry like this that has a spark that I love :) check out my work if u would like

on Oct. 8 2012 at 12:26 pm
HankThePigeon SILVER, Wyndmoor, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have promise to keep and miles to go before i sleep- Robert Frost

really? wow thanks i didn't think it was that good. this makes me really happy right now

on Oct. 8 2012 at 11:07 am
DemonAngel GOLD, Maricopa, Arizona
14 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are either dead or alive.Your heart either pumps blood or life.Our hearts pump words love life and understanding.Into our sub-conscience body for we use the hands of that body to write. -Best friend :'( RIP

This hits a soft spot with me that none of the poetry ha been able to do til now Very good job plz keep writing.