fearing you | Teen Ink

fearing you

September 7, 2012
By Amarithie PLATINUM, Ocala, Florida
Amarithie PLATINUM, Ocala, Florida
26 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Blissfully sleeping in a bed of darkness
Comforted by the immense hatred
A sensation of immense sorrow threads its way into my heart
I burst into tears at the sight of you

Night is my gateway into the world
I am shunned by the crowd as if I was a freak
Death would be a blessing from what I endured
Fading away from your touch

You are the reason I fear the world
Hanging in the crowd of the popular
I knew you were the bane of my life
Fearing the touch of your lips

I haven’t any choice now but to confront you now
The running must end for a new beginning
We‘re eye to eye for the very first time
Together again, but this isn’t the end

Similar Articles


This article has 4 comments.

necci SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2013 at 11:46 pm
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.
-If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

Deep yet honest

Sonza SILVER said...
on Nov. 2 2012 at 11:44 am
Sonza SILVER, Bhubaneswar, Other
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
An apple a day, if well aimed, keeps the doctor away. - P. G. Wodehouse

very beautifully written  

on Sep. 11 2012 at 6:03 pm
VioletRoyal BRONZE, Lebanon, Indiana
3 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be great takes time." - NK

Wow!  This is amazing!  Few grammar errors, but other than that this was a splendid poem to read.  It reminds me of my ex, and it's scary to think what he could do to my new boyfriend to try to get me back.  Thanks for the great read!

on Sep. 11 2012 at 12:56 pm
LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
14 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

wow...intense writing :O v beautiful and deep, uve got a lovely style of writing!