July 27, 2012
By LOLOU BRONZE, Mount Lebanon, Other
LOLOU BRONZE, Mount Lebanon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
only one thing makes a dream impossible , the fear of failure !

We were young
But she was the someone, she isn’t anymore
She was a friend, I cared and said for …
She stood against me
Rigid with affection …
Clever because sly
The pure perfection,
Of no logic tie …
The way she talked,
Sent me butterflies …
And after those years,
After she walked
I became my only wise …
Still she comes by
Say words of love with kisses and hugsstill she tries so hard
But it’s like sitting in a garbage killing bugs
Still she wonders why … !
She shouts, yells … !
Old friend, put an “O” not “Y”
The six poems I wrote that eve
The innocent I was
Oh no, he foolish the naïve … !

The six poems I wrote that eve
Torn to pieces
For no reason to conceave
Let go of what I wrote
Listen what I said to her
Word by word, as if now, and never remote

_”The voice I hear calling
Despite the noise in my earphones”
_She asked:” a guy …”
_”I don’t know, was frazzled by the tones.”
_”you like to be in love ? don’t wanna be so?!”
Answered:” mmm maybe …”
And the foolish me was waiting when it will really be
And the foolish me is waiting no more
And I’ll tell you why, just listen … you’ll see …

She said: “what if you became ??”
I said: “in love ?”
-“ Yes”
- “There will be never enough…”

And completed, the source of a regret …
I cheated, myself I judged before I met …

:”the lucky I will love
I will never ever love anyone more …
That I, the one In million
I will show him peace in war …

I will show him light …
In the black night
I will show him a passion
Stronger than love in its might …”

Put those words in a cussion
Listen to the struggle, the fight:
“That lucky I met
That lucky I loved
Showed me the light in the night
Fed my desire in every fight!”

“The promised love,
I promised of …
Was a result of pure emotion
The vow I took or long before I took
Was never dead, out of motion …
Until …
Until I was fatigue
I gathered all the mess
And sold my innocence an antique

The one I gave my life to
Took away a year or so …
The reality glittered scornfully
The cruelty hissed, giggled playfully

Trust was betrayed
Angels had evil
Until, the fight grew in me and became civil…”

A story of words I said
In a poetry of bitterness
That’s what you’ve just read

A story of a naïve now aware
A story of a child now hidden
A story of words I wrote in words
Of a sadness I wanted to share
Of a warning not to be ridden….

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on Jan. 13 2013 at 2:47 pm
LOLOU BRONZE, Mount Lebanon, Other
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
only one thing makes a dream impossible , the fear of failure !

Thanks a lot :) yes I will for sure I'd be glad to check your writing :)

so_joy SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2012 at 6:43 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great job! I like this very much!! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems-it would mean a lot.

on Aug. 9 2012 at 12:12 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

WOW, thats sooooo deep! This is really good! I got more in to the second half of the poem, but great job still. Write More!