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sweet goodbyes

March 23, 2012
By rebeckabear BRONZE, Escondido, California
rebeckabear BRONZE, Escondido, California
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Favorite Quote:
live life to the fullest


You say you’re sorry you have to go
You have no choice I know
You led me in from your heart
Then you went and broke it apart
You were the twinkle in my eyes
Then you went and said good bye
But what’s the matter
You will come someday
Soon
Then it will be
You and me


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rebeckabear said...
on May. 4 2012 at 4:40 pm
thanks you soooooooo much

on May. 3 2012 at 11:35 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

out of all of your poems i like this one the best, because it has good rymthm, but i love all of your poetry, keep up with the good work, but try to extend your peoms, you don't have to though