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The One

February 12, 2012
By NightGoddess17 PLATINUM, New City, New York
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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The one I hate the most,
Loathe the most,
Fear the most,
Is you.
Why did I open my mouth
And say what I did?
Why am I such an idiot?
Why can't I just learn
To keep my big mouth shut
And let my happiness last?
I'm sorry
I want to apologize a thousand times
And make you hate me a thousand times.
Hurry and say something!
Let's talk like we always did!
Why did it have to be this way?
The one I talk with the most,
Like the most,
Love the most,
Is you.

The author's comments:
A love poem written for Valentine's Day

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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 12:06 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I could feel the emotion of resentment and hurt in this poem. Great job!!! I really liked the end. Suggestion: I would maybe extend and be like why I talk to you so much.