Implode | Teen Ink


February 17, 2012
By eddys96 SILVER, Sacramento, California
eddys96 SILVER, Sacramento, California
9 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away."
—Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Don't Be Afraid if things seem difficult in the beginning. That's only initial impression.. The Important things is not the Retreat; You have to Master Yourself

Sometimes I wish I would.
Wish I could just get over it.
But it’s not going to happen right at this moment.

Her arms tight around my waist.
Cool October wind in my face,
I truly wish the power of her love could eclipse

The overwhelming shame.
She deserves someone better
than me. Someone pure. Worthy.

The shadows bend long toward evening
As the Yamaha quiets to a stutter.
A cloud of regret boils up.
Rains sadness down all around me.

Jealousy squeezed around me.
Too much to dwell myself on, like visions,
always haunting me,
of Michelle and the car accident.

The author's comments:
I have been writing poems for the past three years now, so pretty much when ever i get the inspiration, i grab a pencil and paper and start writing. Either during class or at home. please rate it 5-stars so i can publish more articles in the future.

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on Jun. 8 2012 at 3:28 pm
BreannaN BRONZE, Sacramento, California
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishment the scroll I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul." From Invictus by Willam Erneest Henley

Hey eddie good poem you should read my article.

KelliB GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2012 at 11:38 am
KelliB GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
15 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
Decide that you want it more than you are afraid of it.
- Bill Cosby

I cant imagine the pain of losing something that you love. This poem really enfolds that whole of idea of someone walking away and you realizing that you were never good enough for them and that they are better off without you trying to get them back. Thank you for sharing this! Return the favor and read and comment on mine:)

jj77 said...
on Feb. 27 2012 at 10:53 pm
Looks good.  Keep on writing!