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El Mundo de Agua

February 21, 2012
By kelseycascadia GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
kelseycascadia GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
13 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Today you are you, that is truer than true. There is no one alive who is you-er than you" ~ Dr. Seuss


Raindrops are not so pretty on the ground.
The bubble is popped and fragments lay strewn for monsters to crawl over.
The black storm engulfs the ships, and leaves crackle under trodding rainboots.
Cement sidewalks blend with muddy rolling hills.
And oh how sad do the houses look when they cannot blink the tears out of there glassy eyes.
No, raindrops are not so pretty on the ground.



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on Apr. 2 2012 at 12:53 am
kelseycascadia GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
13 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Today you are you, that is truer than true. There is no one alive who is you-er than you" ~ Dr. Seuss

Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback. I'm so glad that you noticed the metaphors, that's one of my main goals with my poetry.

on Mar. 23 2012 at 7:09 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

PLus, your word choice is wonderful. Great vocabulary! :)

on Mar. 23 2012 at 7:08 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

I love the way you write! IT's so perfectly poetic. You have a great voice in your poetry. I love the metaphor- I'm a sucker for using metaphor. In almost all my poetry there is some form of metaphor there. This is awesome! Great job!