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Lacrimosa

February 5, 2012
By JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
JonathanVondrasek DIAMOND, Oak Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
" CONTAINS ODOR-FIGHTING "ATOMIC-ROBOTS" THAT "SHOOT LASERS" AT YOUR "STENCH MONSTERS" AND REPLACES THEM WITH FRESH, CLEAN. MASCULINE "SCENT ELVES"." - Old Spice deodorant


Mother:
Stop, my son,
Mother is here..
There is no need,
to replace me with tears.

son:
To be apart of the weeping,
was better than, 
you being with me.
Cause my heart is empty,
and my mind is vague.
Liberate your strength,
so you can have a fair defeat.

Mother:
If only I had the condolences,
to accept a proper fate.
Did you ever understand,
the path you didn't take?
You're walking a dark alley,
all alone.. 
(Reap what you have sown...)
Throwing ignorance,
Reflecting negligence,
find my innocence,
in truth...

Son:
Damnation from my birthright.
All which is wrong,
ends with right.
Have you any insight?
Maybe pain is you being a sadist, or a sad sight?

Mother:
Your mutiny shows gusto.
Maybe you're the sadistic one.
Smiling psychotically with a invite.
One day neither of us will weep anymore...

Son:
(Chuckles) Oh Mom, ha ha ha...


The author's comments:
The word itself "Lacrimosa" means the weeping in Latin. Wanted to tell a story, so I simply wrote one. But also I wanted it like diolouge a argument going back and forth.

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