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Your Mirror

January 19, 2012
By EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
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You drove me to this mental
You drove me to this heartbreak
You took me to this crazy
You took me to this dark phase
You put me through denial
You put me in this dark place
You brought me to this mirror
And all I see is your face


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butterfly123 said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 1:45 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! i really like this piece. you captured my attention with the rhyme scheme. there is a certain depth in it that is so simply stated. great work (yet again) and keep writing :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 9:25 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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i really liked it! i also like how it end (:

on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:12 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Wow I'm not usually into short poems like this, but you've caught my attention with it!(: I love it! 5/5

on Jan. 31 2012 at 3:11 pm
exoticchipmunk, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
T.A Exclusive!!

Short but deep... i love it :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 12:27 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Heyy I really love this piece,I get it and admire the end honestly 5/5 !

Mani2x SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2012 at 2:21 pm
Mani2x SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I was born an original, I'm not going to die a copy.

I really like this. =)

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:14 am
iamawesomeK SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am sure I won't be able to fit that many quotes in here.

Pretty nice poem. I absolutely loved the last two lines.