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Cute Stranger

January 12, 2012
By Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!


I don't know your name

don't know where are you from

you don't know I'm even there

but I'm always looking at you

i love the way you keep you hair

hidden beneath that scarf

my friends say the class is boring

but I'm just listening to you

when you ask those questions

your honey sweet voice is what

eradicates the boredom in my mind

then you talk with your friends

smile and giggle and laugh

i never used this word for any girl before

but i daresay you are cute

this is when you look at me

and catch me in my stare

i look back warily but i know

the damage has been done

all my spirit disappears

i glance away, embarrassed

you shrug and continue talking

to your friends apathetically

i can't describe the feeling

that I'm feeling right now

can't get the words... Can't write

this is when the bell rings

and you're gone!



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on Jan. 19 2012 at 10:15 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thanks Harry!

on Jan. 19 2012 at 10:15 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thank you Hammad! =D

on Jan. 19 2012 at 10:14 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

I will! =) Thanks a lot! =)

HarryJAMEs said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 10:08 am
I love it! Is it real? I mean, is the girl really in your class? :p Outstanding though! Keep the good work up!

hammad said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 10:05 am
It's brilliant! =) 9/10

on Jan. 17 2012 at 11:19 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Yeah, it is a cliche... And thanks a lot for appreciating my work! =) It means a lot! (:

on Jan. 17 2012 at 10:13 am
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
7 articles 0 photos 37 comments
I like the neat, crisp, compelling form, and mostly the words are beautiful. Maybe 'honey sweet voice" is a cleche' ?

sssmmm said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 8:51 am
Keep it up dude! You surely are talented! =)

on Jan. 17 2012 at 8:48 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thanks! =) And yeah, I'll check your work asap! =D

Inksy SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 4:22 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Aw, this is really cute (: I love it! Keep up the good work, you're really talented. Could you check out some of my work and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:45 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thanks! =) And yes I will! =)

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:45 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

arghhh! I posted it again as a new comment ! lol

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:44 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

sorry, the above comment was meant for you :p

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:43 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thanks! Nice screen name by the way :p

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:42 am
5/5 =) Like Lacee said, I didn't want it to end! Awesome grip dude!

on Jan. 16 2012 at 9:39 am
Awesome! I love it! Keep up the good work man! =)

on Jan. 15 2012 at 8:07 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thanks! It means a lot! =)

LaceeJade GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 7:16 pm
LaceeJade GOLD, Bucyrus, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
♥ I've made mistakes in my life. i've let people take advantage of me, and i accepted way less than i deserve. But, i've learned from my bad choices, and even though there are some things i can never get back and people who will never be sorry. i'll know better next time and i wont settle for anything less than i deserve. ♥

Ah, I didn't want it to end. I love this. Very good.