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what you do to my life

December 8, 2011
By mrow363akarobinhood GOLD, Jenks, Oklahoma
mrow363akarobinhood GOLD, Jenks, Oklahoma
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The wind blows by and with it so seems time everything changes.
Winter creeps on but with it comes your love,
How I wish I’d known I was seeing my forever.
My life was cold, broken, and lost,
But then you came along and lit up the path.
My broken heart you sewed together the cold of life,
You changed the weather now I smile,
I greet each day with a laugh as I sit and think about my forever.
You’ve changed my life you mended my broken wings,
As I soar high and think of you,
With a smile bright my eyes alive,
You bring laughter,
You bring joy.
I’m so glad I went out that cold night to a party,
I wanted not to attend because now I’ve met you and alas my life is alive again.

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MysticLady said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 9:47 pm
MysticLady, Estancia, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it

This is very nice. good job. :) see you around

on Nov. 4 2012 at 11:26 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Great job! This is really meaningful; I'm impressed! P.S. I love how you incorporated the weather into this poem. It's beautiful. Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!

on Dec. 25 2011 at 10:15 pm
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

Mrow, you did really good on this piece. :)

on Dec. 19 2011 at 12:57 am
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

Did you finally find someone Michael?  I'm happy for you :D