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Declaring ones love

November 29, 2011
By Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”


my love
i can not help feeling

the way i do
impossible to stop
you mean so much to me
yet you don't know it
to have you sit there
not knowing, kills me
silently, i hope
you notice , that you feel
the same way about me
for there is no going back
only forward
i declare my love
i scream it to the sky
i whisper it to the earth
i sing it through out the land
so I'll tell you again
i declare my love to you

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on Dec. 2 2011 at 5:14 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

This is really good Goddess. It's SO full of emotion, and like I told you, that's what I love most about poetry. GREAT job!! :)

on Dec. 2 2011 at 1:33 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

thank you it means alot to me.

on Dec. 1 2011 at 3:55 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Woah, this is good, very moving and heartfelt. I think my favorite lines were: "I scream it to the sky,/I whisper it through the earth," (sorry about the added punctuations and caps, I know it's not your style, but I do it automatically.) I like this alot, I think I'll give you four stars! Great work! (For the record, if anyone else had such bad punctuation, i would have given them a two, but like I said I know that isn't your style.)

on Dec. 1 2011 at 2:40 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

*beginning

 


on Dec. 1 2011 at 2:39 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

SO people know it the beging starts wiht my love.