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Raging Sea

November 18, 2011
By Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

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I am the ocean
On a stormy night
These waves of confusion--
Angrily disturbing
My usually Serene disposition—
Crash, sending the white, fluffy sea -foam
Floating on the water surface
Like the dead bodies
Of sailors thrown overboard.

Yes, I am the raging sea
I can feel the rain
Pounding on my back
And the thunder encourages me
To overturn the frightened ships
And drag all those innocent people
To the very bottom of my stomach
To suffocate and gag them
Until not one more breathe escapes from their lips
And their heart no longer thumps
And their bodies stop flopping
Like fish out of water.

Only then will my hunger be satisfied
only then will I calm.

© Sarah M., Blairsville, PA

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Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 2:33 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
6 articles 3 photos 77 comments

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Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

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Thanks I plan to.
Opticalillusion DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 2:24 pm
Opticalillusion DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
64 articles 13 photos 59 comments

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I am an artist bound only for the poet's glory....But only achieve half of the success that my dreams aspire to find, And to what do the whispers tell me of this failure...To what end to they haunt my nightmares...my eternal dark dreams...

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nice poem keep writeing
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:20 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

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Thank you!!
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:17 pm
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
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this was a beautiful poem good job on it
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 9:28 am
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

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Thanks! I'd love to look at your work.
Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 3:49 pm
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Good job! I loved your description and imagery. Keep writing, you're very talented.

Please take a look at some of my work if you have a spare minute. I'd love to hear your opinion. :)