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love eternally

November 18, 2011
By Mz.Smith SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
Mz.Smith SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"In order to be irreplaceable you must be different!"


Sometimes struggles in life,



Try to knock you down.


Then you let all joy drop to the ground.


One day loves gonna come in and make it right.

They'll love you and hold you all through the night.


Don't give up and don't you fret.
They'll make things right again i bet.
When you find the right one and don't let them go.
Worries are gone so your love can flow.

That person sees you through all the wrong.
When they're around your worries are gone.
You try not to smile, but you just can't help it.
Then your world changes after one peck on the lips.

When they're gone, you want them near.
"I love you" is all you want to hear.
Just give them the secret key.
And loved eternally you will be!


The author's comments:
This piece was written to go along with the novel i wrote it symbolizes the whole story. If you like this poem you would love my story.

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on Dec. 12 2011 at 8:20 am
Mz.Smith SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In order to be irreplaceable you must be different!"

thanxs so much

missbee said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 1:47 pm
Love this collection

on Dec. 7 2011 at 10:44 am
Mz.Smith SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In order to be irreplaceable you must be different!"

well thank you so much i appreciate the comment and look forward to seeing some of your work as well

mother goose said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 11:40 am
I love this poem