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Night Light

October 16, 2011
By Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
-The only time you can get away with murder is when writing a book!


One headlight,
Persistently cutting through the night. Penetrating the blackness and filling it with light.


The author's comments:
I saw a Motorcycle on my way home one night, looked at his one, lit-up headlight and came up with this.

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on Nov. 2 2011 at 6:33 pm
aurorairis SILVER, Darien, Connecticut
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Simple, but great and powerful!

Please check out some of my poems if you can!


on Oct. 24 2011 at 4:45 pm
Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
-The only time you can get away with murder is when writing a book!

Thanks for commenting. I sure will!

 


on Oct. 24 2011 at 4:45 pm
Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
-The only time you can get away with murder is when writing a book!

Hey, Thanks for the comment!

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2011 at 6:30 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I like this a lot, the rhyme scheme is great. Do you think maybe you could check out my poem? Please?

Risible SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 7:38 pm
Risible SILVER, Norwalk, Connecticut
7 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sooner or later, those who win are those who think they can." -Richard Bach

I really like this! Good rthyme and use of rhyme. It's sharp and catchy. One thing I'd change would be put the line "Penetrating...and" on its own line.