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beside you

August 30, 2011
By tlboyer SILVER, Hanalei, Nevada
tlboyer SILVER, Hanalei, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
Live for the present, Learn from the past, and look forward to the future.


Through the silence/ and the peace

There's a restlestness/ that can't be beat

Through the fold and the crease

I see a sudden heat

The quick movement - of agial hands

Soft curresses - from a lovers touch

I see them - dancing in the sand

As the waves crash and crush

In the trows of exctasy

There's something of a mystery

In the middle of their dance

something breaks the trance

Rising high and powerfully

So pure and heavenly

It pulls me back, Brand New

To lay here - beside you


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on Sep. 7 2011 at 3:42 pm
Cantrella PLATINUM, Kamuela, Hawaii
31 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Backward, turn backward
oh time in your flight,
make me a child again,
just for tonight." E.A. Allen

Great job! You know I love this poem :) well done with the imagery and symbolism- the rhythm actually reminds me of waves on a beach.