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The End

August 7, 2011
By jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 44 comments

This is the end of the road for us…

It was never suppost to end up like this, never

What happened? What happened to you? To me? To us?

You have become this person I don't even know anymore

Is that because of me? Did I change you this much? Did I do this to you?

I know that our relationship was never the best, but we worked, we made through it.

So why are you doing this? Why have you become this person? How could you?

You became this man, that I couldn’t even see you as. Is there too much hurt?

I’ve been hurt as much as you have, if not more, in ways you will never know.

But why is it, that I have changed and become a better person

Why you, lost the great man you were?

These are all things that I will never know now.

It’s unbarable but I cant change that.

This is the end for us, it was never suppost to be like this, never, so why did it?…

The author's comments:
Angry and confusing brake-up, missing the person that i fell in love with

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jaylw GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 8:50 am
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 44 comments
thank you!! i will, hope all is well

on Nov. 23 2011 at 8:55 am
TheCapturedBat GOLD, Belen, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
If all else perished and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger.
-- Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

It is amazing the way your poetry captures intense feelings. I have just been through a break-up, and i have tried to use poetry to express my feelings about it. Will you read my poem called "Mark My Skin"?

jaylw GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 9:47 pm
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
18 articles 8 photos 44 comments
Please leave coments thanks!!