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My Final Memory

August 1, 2011
By LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Life is but a book just waiting to be filled, you make your own story

Sweet sighs
With you I lie
Feelings that gently bind
Bliss, sweet bliss
You give me a loving kiss
Light touches
Little seen
But love is greatly known
Eyes don’t meet
But passion is shown
Skin that tingles
Breath that warm
Hands that touch
Tastes to learn
To me you whisper in my ear
The words I so love to hear
I have to see the love in your eyes
As the dawns light comes to rise
I urge it to reveal its self faster
I want to see what I know you feel
As that golden globe lights my view
I slowly sit up
My tears start to slowly fall
And as my heavy heart beats dead
I stare at your empty space
It’s just hard to believe you’re gone

The author's comments:
I write this to the love of my life and my only true friend. I thank him for being there and to let him know that its as painful to be apart for me as it is for him.

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Proof SILVER said...
on Oct. 27 2011 at 10:57 am
Proof SILVER, Silver Spring, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
The world is yours you just have to take it

this is a phenominale peice many can relate to this good job keep it up and going

J4Yc3 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 8:17 pm
J4Yc3 GOLD, Nashville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

Amazing poem loved it. Thanks for commenting by the way.

on Oct. 15 2011 at 10:20 am
turtlepenguin BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
‎"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
— Dr. Seuss

"Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it." --Confucius

I really enjoyed this poem :) I loved the rhyming in it and how it has a special meaning to you.