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Visions
June 20, 2011
All I see is the
image
of you and me
holding hands
holding me
till I saw
you and her
holding hands
holding her
© Heather H., Phoenix, AZ
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This article has 14 comments.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:07 pm
haha ok i'll check
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:04 pm
thanks clever screen ane miss you
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:02 pm
oommmgggg once again I see how this involves youu-knoww-whooo lol fantastic! :)
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 11:39 am
and on that note, your lucky numbers ar 1,5,7,3,54, and 9. live, laugh, don't bet money, and check out some of my work if you ever get the chance. ;)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:39 pm
ya u r like a fortune cookie thanks
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:32 pm
the image of two people holding hands always makes makes me think of a trap closing down...love can become a beautiful cage.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:06 pm
actually i've never had a boyfriend this and my other love poems are based off a looong story
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:02 pm
Aw, this is sad. It's like your other poem, 'Vines'. I'm guessing you recently suffered a break-up? If so, my heart goes out to you.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 7:16 pm
awww thanks everyone I;m sorry about punctuation but I don't worry about it in my poetry. In all other aspects of writing I do.
ArgonElement SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 11:05 am
Short and unbelievably sweet.
FrownMonaLisa SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 10:05 am
Really cute. Sad but sweet at the same time. I love it. But try not to let your words be so choppy and use some punctuation where there should be pauses. Other than that AMAZING
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 4:28 am
few words but "aw!"
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