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Hushed Voices

April 11, 2011
By CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll


Hushed voices speaking,
ever so sweetly,
In the back of my mind.
Your okay,
your okay.
The monster lingers,
in front of my face,
spitting words
they are never kind.
The monster's mouth moves,
hatred spews.
I draw back,
into the most,
recessive parts,
of my thoughts.
Where hushed voices,
my own voices,
sweetly whisper,
your okay,
I'm okay.


The author's comments:
No matter who puts you down you have to stand back up somehow.

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on Oct. 29 2011 at 9:37 pm
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
17 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

Oh wow you are right!!

Lol I almost never get that stuff messed up, thank you!

:D


on Jun. 20 2011 at 7:40 am
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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I love it! Keep on writing!

on Jun. 19 2011 at 4:06 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

I really liked this! The only thing that made it a bit hard to read was that "your" should've been "you're" a few times and there might've been a few extra commas at the end of lines. But regardless, this is a very good piece. :)

on Jun. 3 2011 at 1:22 pm
xximjustmexx PLATINUM, Oak Forest, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There's no god. There's no religion. There's only life, what you do with YOUR life, who YOU let affect YOUR life. Bad things happen to everyone, you just have to learn to deal with them.

Wow. I can totally relate. Very good. Please keep writing.

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2011 at 5:34 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

The imagery was really cool. :)