Destiny | Teen Ink


April 10, 2011
By Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
32 articles 4 photos 178 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

A ruler,
as unknown as true love
as feared as death
the lonely man’s last hope

Plentiful for some
empty for others.


You or destiny
Your destiny

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RealRiter GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2015 at 10:37 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
10 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I did not fail 101 times, but I simply found 101 ways that did not work." -Thomas Edison

Cool, cool, like it. Short and sweet. I`d say to MAYBE, not always even, but MAYBE (sense I don`t want to change your style of writing at all) try changing some of the awesome tongue twisters into something a little more meaningful or adding a little more to a poem next time. You like to write about not solid (or random) or abstract things (a little less abstract than me), like me. Love it. Your style is awesome (as always), but I`m not gonna vote on this one. I`m gonna wait until I see another thing that really uses the creativity I know you have. Use it. You`ll do great, and believe me, you`ll be happy when you share with the world, whether or not they like it.