Cool, cool, like it. Short and sweet. I`d say to MAYBE, not always even, but MAYBE (sense I don`t want to change your style of writing at all) try changing some of the awesome tongue twisters into something a little more meaningful or adding a little more to a poem next time. You like to write about not solid (or random) or abstract things (a little less abstract than me), like me. Love it. Your style is awesome (as always), but I`m not gonna vote on this one. I`m gonna wait until I see another thing that really uses the creativity I know you have. Use it. You`ll do great, and believe me, you`ll be happy when you share with the world, whether or not they like it.