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I'm Done

March 24, 2011
By abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
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abstractminded GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
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when life throws you lemons....throw back grenades

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I'm done with the bitter lies, the sinister cries of those who just don't care. That's why i just don't swear and don't believe that trust can be achieved just by getting under the skin of those with thin sleeves. I'm done with comments that vommits on clean tongues, dirty hands beating on others with clean drums.I'm done with ill faited opinionated remarks of those who stay straighted in a criminatedly dark world.I'm done overall with violent people who stay strapped like overalls with shoulder tall problems that'll just lead to a colder fall......I'm done.

© Kyle G., Clarksville, TN

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this piece was brought based upon the everyday problems people get tired of going through and dealing with in life
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