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True Beauty.

March 23, 2011
By MadiNomNomMonster BRONZE, Hoschton, Georgia
MadiNomNomMonster BRONZE, Hoschton, Georgia
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You're standing there,
looking at me.
Wonder, "Is she real?
or just a dream?"
Does it really matter though?
For, either way, my light will gleam.
Shine down on you,
and seem,
as if I'm only a fantasy.

You see,
I am not fake,
I'm as real as can be.
Pure beauty,
lost at sea.
However, you still wonder,
"Is it really you i see?"
Oblivious to the fact,
that true beauty is underneath.



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TheDuck GOLD said...
on May. 8 2011 at 11:19 am
TheDuck GOLD, Braselton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
“Raids, bullets, crime... no problem. A missing duster? Crisis."-The Last Sacrifice
"If we stand for nothing, we'll fall for anything." -All Time Low

Where do you get your inspiration?

TheDuck GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 2:18 pm
TheDuck GOLD, Braselton, Georgia
11 articles 12 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Raids, bullets, crime... no problem. A missing duster? Crisis."-The Last Sacrifice
"If we stand for nothing, we'll fall for anything." -All Time Low

Anytime!  I love your writing!

on Apr. 30 2011 at 11:30 am
MadiNomNomMonster BRONZE, Hoschton, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments
thanks! (:

TheDuck GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 2011 at 10:15 am
TheDuck GOLD, Braselton, Georgia
11 articles 12 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Raids, bullets, crime... no problem. A missing duster? Crisis."-The Last Sacrifice
"If we stand for nothing, we'll fall for anything." -All Time Low

Poetry is definitely your strong point!  I loved this poem!