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March 15, 2011
By TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
34 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)


Sinking into bed,
I let out a
Siiiiiigggggghhhhh …
Before I know it
I've fallen asleep.
My dreams
Have changed their light bulbs.
Everything is brighter.
Dark,
Damp,
Dusty
Corners
Have had their shadows
Blown away.


The author's comments:
I wrote this in 5th grade. Thank you, Mrs. Fairchild; you are why I am a poet today.

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on Feb. 27 2012 at 10:31 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
6 articles 9 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

Teachers can be so inspiring, and this poem proves it! Great writing, I love the siiiggghh at the begining!

on Feb. 27 2012 at 10:32 am
AimeeRichae SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If life hands me lemons, you better believe I'll be making the best dang lemonade ever!"

this is written very well for a fifth grader. i really like it. Keep Writing!


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