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Thanks Brother

March 13, 2011
By Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I was alone all this while
in search of a real friend...
You came with a smile
and took me by my hand.

You made me walk on the path of stones
just to let me know there are flowers ahead..
You made me learn how to smile
after all my tears had shed.

You took me through the cloudy sky
just to show me the sunny part of it..
You made me realize that happy days are here
and together in the garden of happiness we sit.

You took me to the closed door
and told me where is its opening..
You gave me its key
and told that its just the beginning.

The doors of happiness and trust were open
and it lead me through a flowery road..
without you where could be
in troubled waters was my boat.

Thanks to you dear brother
for always being there in my grays..
for bringing out my real self
and for promising to be my shade.

Thanks dear brother for the love you gave
its been seventeen years of all this care..
I pray that this doesn't over
for, a brother like you is rare!!


The author's comments:
I really love my brother a whole lot and he means everything to me. With out him I don't know how I would servive on my own without him being my eyes.

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on May. 31 2013 at 4:42 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Hi, thank you so much and I'm happy you love it. I have more poems if you want to read them and my books to.   

on May. 31 2013 at 12:13 am
Carly_Elizabeth PLATINUM, Othello, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"And above all, watch with glittering eyes the whole world around you because the greatest secrets are always hidden in the most unlikely places. Those who don't believe in magic will never find it."
Roald Dahl

Nice I like it! My brother is everything to me too. 

on May. 31 2013 at 12:12 am
Carly_Elizabeth PLATINUM, Othello, Washington
39 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And above all, watch with glittering eyes the whole world around you because the greatest secrets are always hidden in the most unlikely places. Those who don't believe in magic will never find it."
Roald Dahl

Nice I like it. My brother is everything to me too.