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Heartbroken
January 26, 2011
Met you last week
Love first sight
Always wanted to peek.
Said my chance was a might.
Then you Met my best friend
You guys started talking
All those texts you guys send
You sent me packing
Then again my chance came
We got together
I thought you felt the same
Then came bad weather
You fell for the friend
Left me behind
You try to mend
But I cannot find
That forgiveness you want
Us friends is what you ask
But our past is my haunt
I put on my mask
That happy face
You don’t realize
You I can not replace
All I can do is analyze
Where this all went wrong
That first kiss
But it is all gone
Im at a miss
You left me last night
Tears keep falling
Here I am heartbroken
Watching you be
With my best friend
© Kim B., Marblehead, MA
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This article has 2 comments.
far.from.you. GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2011 at 4:41 pm
Oh my GOSH.... u are amazing! Do u know me?! lol jk, cuz i can relate. Good job(:
OliviaShea GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 11:00 pm
i love this! it is so good! i can almost feel your emotions through your words, which is such an amazing thing when it comes to poetry! the one line i dont absolutely love is "i am at a miss". it flows well with the poem, but the words together dont completely make sense (to me anyways, but i could be wrong) maybe try "it is you i miss) it has the same number of syllables but gets across a clearer message(: just a suggestion. but even without any suggestions this is a great poem(:
