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December 18, 2010
By jessvente PLATINUM, Athens, New York
jessvente PLATINUM, Athens, New York
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rest your weary heart on mine
only pain comes with time

the remedy relies on the clock
not in our actions, not in our heart
we lose ourselves in this hollow dark

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on Feb. 15 2011 at 8:51 am
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells." From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

Great! lol I love the rhyme, the concept, & the wording! Very good job!