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Invisable Children

January 9, 2011
By Schoolrulesonoccations GOLD, Port Orchard, Washington
Schoolrulesonoccations GOLD, Port Orchard, Washington
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For once think about the world
Where we live, who we are, and why we're here?
Think about those who know those questions but out of fear never answer
They talk and spread like a disease of fear, death, and sorrow,
throughout the life of children.
Child soldiers, what a horrid thing, a disgrace to mother nature, a sad
story of hope and dismay.
Do they ever think it will end?
The suffering, the pain, the death in which they all end.
Running with no place, no end.
Through the day, not at night for they may find a horrifying sight.
Some say they are Africans, Pakistanians, and Sudan's but they are People,
they own the right to live in peace and harmony.
But only people in which are stupid and ignorant can take which is
theirs away.

The author's comments:
When I wrote this passage I had watched a movie before. It was about the Invisable Children that live in parts a africa,and the world. My teacher showed us this video because he wanted us(as a CWP class) to understand what was going on in the world as we speak. How many thousands of millions go through hard conditions every day and people never even knew they exisisted. For me the movie was sad but to think that happens everyday is heartbreaking. So I did something about it and wrote this poem as a sign of I was listening.

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on Feb. 7 2012 at 9:06 am
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.

It has meaning and it has depth, not only does the message you portray is good, the way you strung everything together is the finsihing touch, like icing on a cake, please read and comment on some of my poems:)

on Feb. 28 2011 at 9:34 pm
Schoolrulesonoccations GOLD, Port Orchard, Washington
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Hope People like this!!!! Its my first one! I would love helpful hints for the following ones to come thanks!!!