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A Change In Path

December 29, 2010
By Daydreamer14 PLATINUM, Norman, Oklahoma
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Daydreamer14 PLATINUM, Norman, Oklahoma
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"Reality leaves a lot to the imagination." - John Lennon

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I'm in another world when I talk to you.
One where rain doesn't pour on my head at a constant pace and clouds of gray fade as sunshine pours out hope from the light blue sky.
So I smile as your voice is played through my ears because I am taking the path that was once covered in fog.
Now it is easily seen and my legs pick up speed; your voice guiding me to the road of Happiness.
All I can wish for now is you. Because without you, I will get lost; won't be able to make it through.

© Amy J., Sebring, OH

The author's comments:
I feel like this one should be two seperate poems...I don't know, but there's something about it that I don't like.
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