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I know you saw

December 29, 2010
By Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me


I know you saw me
When nobody else would
You saw me
And turned away

The Hurt I felt
The loneliness I felt
And the weakness
I know you saw

You left me to die
You saw the final teardrop in my eye
That nobody else saw
But I know you saw it

I still remember that day
The day you couldn't bear to help
That day, is the only day I still remember 
Which Is why I can't forget it

That is what finally killed me
That last ever memory of you
You couldn't do it
But, I know you saw


The author's comments:
This is for those who needed help and nobody gave it to them and just walked away

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on Jul. 25 2011 at 7:54 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks :) and i did :)

on Jul. 25 2011 at 5:55 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

You definitely accomplished what you set out to do! This is very well written- sad but relatable and deserving of attention! I have one with the same kind of feel called "This?- This Is Nothing At All" if a little darker. :P

on Jul. 25 2011 at 5:33 pm
ohmakemeover BRONZE, Centerville, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Touch comes before sight, before speech. It is the first language and the last, and it always tells the truth."- Margaret Atwood

As a girl who knows surviviors of abuse, this was really heartbreaking.  I hope you eventually got the help you deserve.

on Jul. 24 2011 at 2:07 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

once again great poem it has great meaning good job

on Feb. 27 2011 at 3:09 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Very...deep. I like it! Lots of meaning.

on Feb. 25 2011 at 6:23 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thank you for commenting on all my poems, as you probably already know, my poems all have different moods and well thats really because of when i write them. This is a sad poem because i wrote it when i was sad...but i'm happy you liked it!! :)

on Feb. 25 2011 at 5:46 pm
CharlesDickens SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."
~Voltaire

This is a really sad poem.  Don't get me wrong, that's actually a good thing, making the reader feel emotion, but it's sad.

on Feb. 15 2011 at 5:37 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

That is so deep. Amazing. I like it a lot, it like nearly brought tears to my face.

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on Jan. 22 2011 at 11:07 am
Coffee BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
4 articles 5 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your Face.

I like this a lot!!! I like how it doesn't straight out tell you what their trying to say, but it's understandable too. It's one of those poems a lot of people can relate to because it's vague, but meaningful. :)

on Jan. 21 2011 at 9:48 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

I really like this poem. I have to say. Really good. There isn't much I would change about this (other than capitalizing the title). It's perfect. I really like it. I can totally relate to this. Awesome. Five stars, great job.