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Lunar Metaphor

October 21, 2010
By alexxeo GOLD, Saint Helens, Oregon
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alexxeo GOLD, Saint Helens, Oregon
12 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Absence from the ones we love is self from self-- a deadly banishment." -William Shakespere

"Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication." -Leonardo De Vinci

"Seduce my mind
...and speak those words to the point of
contradiction.
Hypocrisy never seemed so beautiful.
Your lips have it down to an
art. Oh, I know I'm in love with
wordplay.
Speak to me,
'til your lips are numb.
We'll always have pen and paper. " -By Anonymous, Mississauga, Canada

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Sometimes,I wish I was the
moon
because I could hide, behind
those dark,
dark clouds
And whenever I wanted to…
come out, and
Shine

© Brianna C., Lincoln Park, MI

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HateKnuckle SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2012 at 4:04 am
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
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This is awesome. I love the dark nights when you can see the moon shine so bright that you can actually see where you're going. Very great poem.4 stars.
alexxeo GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2011 at 9:52 pm
alexxeo GOLD, Saint Helens, Oregon
12 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Absence from the ones we love is self from self-- a deadly banishment." -William Shakespere

"Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication." -Leonardo De Vinci

"Seduce my mind
...and speak those words to the point of
contradiction.
Hypocrisy never seemed so beautiful.
Your lips have it down to an
art. Oh, I know I'm in love with
wordplay.
Speak to me,
'til your lips are numb.
We'll always have pen and paper. " -By Anonymous, Mississauga, Canada

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thanks!:D your comment is very nice.
Kellie_F. said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 7:22 pm
Kellie_F., Navarre, Florida
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short, simple, and to the point. enjoyable
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 11:53 am
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I love it! Great metaphors, we all need a dark cloud to hide behind sometimes and we all shine at something, your's being writing!
stephie95 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 9:15 am
stephie95 PLATINUM, Tripoli, Other
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really cute and nice...

and true for a lot of people, including me... :D keep writting

alexxeo GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2010 at 10:01 pm
alexxeo GOLD, Saint Helens, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Absence from the ones we love is self from self-- a deadly banishment." -William Shakespere

"Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication." -Leonardo De Vinci

"Seduce my mind
...and speak those words to the point of
contradiction.
Hypocrisy never seemed so beautiful.
Your lips have it down to an
art. Oh, I know I'm in love with
wordplay.
Speak to me,
'til your lips are numb.
We'll always have pen and paper. " -By Anonymous, Mississauga, Canada

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Thanks!(: I'm glad you like it :DD
Faith Brown BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 3:55 pm
Faith Brown BRONZE, Mount Shasta, California
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Simple, elegant, beautiful, and true for many :) I love it.
alexxeo GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 10:02 pm
alexxeo GOLD, Saint Helens, Oregon
12 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Absence from the ones we love is self from self-- a deadly banishment." -William Shakespere

"Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication." -Leonardo De Vinci

"Seduce my mind
...and speak those words to the point of
contradiction.
Hypocrisy never seemed so beautiful.
Your lips have it down to an
art. Oh, I know I'm in love with
wordplay.
Speak to me,
'til your lips are numb.
We'll always have pen and paper. " -By Anonymous, Mississauga, Canada

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Please comment(: