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Stone Breath

October 8, 2010
By Treckintime SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
Treckintime SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not let others believe what you can achieve, but achieve what you believe."

Ha! Ha! Ha!
You'r kidding right?
Blah! Blah! Blah!
I'm hearing lies.

Tell me please, that your joking.
I attempt to swallow,
but there it's lurking.

The empty void where once you were.
Now is empty with a deafening silence. All is still, nothing stirs.

How did it all get this far?

Handing me back what i handed to you.
My love slowly sank,
but at one time it frantically flew?

How did it all get this far?

The author's comments:
This poem was inspired with the girl i first truthfully loved. She took my heart.

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on Mar. 13 2011 at 5:39 pm
haylzebraz SILVER, Memphis, Michigan
5 articles 2 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be sad that it's over be happy that it happened.

-Dr. Suess

wow i really liked it! a reader could tell how much emotion it has and that is a good thing. an author with that power can do anything! Bon travail!