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my shadow

September 24, 2010
By spirit_bound GOLD, Clarmore, Oklahoma
spirit_bound GOLD, Clarmore, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"The human spirit is not measured by the size of the act, but the size of the heart"


what is my shadow?
my conscience? my death?
or is it none of these things?
is it the deep depths of my black heart?
following me. following me?
or is it not even that?
is it nothing, made up by the mind?
to amuse, and abuse?
no you may say,
for you are like me,
for us only we, believe,
that the shadow is but darkness,
for all to see.
and you will be you,
and i will be me.
and others ask why we must even be.
but to fit out,
is that bad?
for that we may never know,
like we may never know,
what is my shadow?



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on Oct. 6 2010 at 12:52 am
LizzyMarie21 BRONZE, San Jose, California
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wow, this is amzing, keep up the good work =]

on Oct. 5 2010 at 10:57 am
LuckyOtter SILVER, Franklinton, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
It is our choices that show who we truly are....far more than our abilities.
- Albus Dumbledore

I really like this poem. Most don't like how t doesn't have punctuation, but there is a world famous poet that was famous for his poems and how he doesn't capitalize any letters. But forget them if they comment you are very original. Love the poem!

on Oct. 4 2010 at 11:09 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

I just flat out love this! I think the whole idea behind it is so creative! Amazing! (: please check out my work if u get time ;) keep writin ur amazing at it!

on Oct. 4 2010 at 9:23 pm
drowning-in-sorrow GOLD, Randallstown, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Don't make someone a priority if they only make you an option.

I really like this. Good job.

on Oct. 4 2010 at 7:56 pm
spirit_bound GOLD, Clarmore, Oklahoma
18 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The human spirit is not measured by the size of the act, but the size of the heart"

thaks so much!

on Oct. 4 2010 at 6:51 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

i really like this!! you are such a good writer.

rate/comment on some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this. keep writing!