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Human fate.

July 2, 2010
By beautiful_but_torn GOLD, West Jefferson, North Carolina
beautiful_but_torn GOLD, West Jefferson, North Carolina
18 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's all make believe, isn't it?
Marilyn Monroe


Weak at heart.
Fragile minds.
So easily we break.
Our emotions control most of what we do.
Making it harder to get through.
A fate, in which there is no escape.
So this as humans, as man-kind; is our fate.



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on Feb. 9 2012 at 7:51 pm
beautiful_but_torn GOLD, West Jefferson, North Carolina
18 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's all make believe, isn't it?
Marilyn Monroe

thanks very much.:D

on Aug. 14 2010 at 7:08 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
30 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

This is very good. I don't think that there is anything spectacular about your rhythm and flow, but the message and words you are getting across come to center focus because of that.  I liked the way you described us. It was very well written, though. Nicely done. I enjoyed this. 

 



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