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His Stuck-Up Heart

May 29, 2010
By Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
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"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

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He's so dramatic,
Stuck-up, and full of himself.
He's always trying to impress, 
And show off.
He annoys me like crazy.

The strangest thing,
Is that I feel kind of,
Attracted to that.

I think I want him,
To hold me in his,
Dramatic arms.
And I want to feel the beat,
Of his stuck-up heart.

© Paige B., Woonsocket, RI

The author's comments:
One guy that goes to my school, is always talking about himself and must think I like him. I think I like him too, but his attitude is very annoying sometimes-- because he is convinced I will like him sooner or later.
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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:33 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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you know, I read this again, and this is really awesome.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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oui oui captain.
Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 12:48 am
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
27 articles 8 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

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thank you :)
Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 12:47 am
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
27 articles 8 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

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haha thanks :)))
Patience97 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 12:47 am
Patience97 PLATINUM, New Tripoli, Pennsylvania
27 articles 8 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People believe that if we really want to eliminate something, focus on that. How much sense does it make for us to give the particular problem all of the energy, as opposed to focusing on trust, love, living in abundance, education, or peace? -Un.

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Thank you so much :) My writing has always been a little... weak, so, I came to teenink hoping I could make it stronger.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 8:44 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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very nice captain. i like the vague irony of it. 5 stars.
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 8:00 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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I love it!!! its so great and EVERYONE can relate!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! thanks and great work!!!
AbneyT SILVER said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 7:40 pm
AbneyT SILVER, Spring Valley, Illinois
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Amazing Write!

I'm not going to lie after the first line or two, I'm thinking ergh, this is just another unorganized vent. Then the last stanza was PERFECT!. Good Job!!! <3 it!!