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Senses of Summer

May 22, 2010
By BeautifulRescue GOLD, Olathe, Kansas
BeautifulRescue GOLD, Olathe, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
if you are curious. I can also write a poem about most anything, so if you have a topic you want written about, just ask. :) (I hate the 250 characters thing!)

I've been jumping from the tops of buildings...

Delicious humidity.
Warmth of light
From the sun
On my bare

Scalding sun burns
The skin off
Of the tip
Of my

Sploosh of water in the
Pool as I dive
In and cool
My entire

Delicious humidity.
Scalding sunburns.
Sploosh of water.

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on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:33 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

Amazing! I thought I'd check out one of your poems (we met in the forums) and I really like this. Ahh, summer. :)

on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:02 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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Oh, I relish this when I read it.  I feel like i'm swimming in summer. Fantastic job, you've painted a picture with words, wonderfully.

on Jul. 3 2010 at 7:46 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow, i would have never thought to write about summer like this!!! its really original, unique, and fabulous, i really like it alot!!! awesome job and the ending is wonderful, it really ties it all together!! please check out and comment on some of my work if you get the chance!!!:)