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Shower of Kisses

May 14, 2010
By ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3


I've been walkin' down this road,
Waitin' for you to come hold my hand.
I've walked miles and miles
But nothing is going quite like I planned.

I stop walking,
I've lost all my hope.
My hands are still empty,
How do I cope?

It starts as a drizzle
I look up at the skies
It's a shower of kisses
Now your hand's in mine.


The author's comments:
Ah, don't you love writing poetry in the middle of the night?

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on Jul. 10 2010 at 11:27 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

i totally agree!!

on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:13 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

Thank you so much! I'll def be checking out your work! Thank you thank you thank you!

on Jul. 7 2010 at 9:13 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

i LOVE writing poetry in the middle of the night haha

on Jul. 7 2010 at 7:34 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your´╗┐ funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

OMB LOVE THIS! im a fan of "ill be fine 899" and u commented on her story so i checked u out. absolutely love this. u dont know HOW MUCH this relates to me!!!! i LOVE IT!!!!!!!! :)

ps: im totally faving this


on Jul. 7 2010 at 5:26 pm
fearlessalways13 SILVER, N/A, New Hampshire
7 articles 6 photos 46 comments
This is so cute! Beautifully written, too. (: The title is great! I saw it and clicked right away because it was eye-catching. Keep writing and please check out my work!

on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:38 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awwww :) how cute<3

on Jun. 10 2010 at 5:09 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
<3

Thank you so much! how did you stumble across this poem anyway?

on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:50 pm
jesseay09 SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel.... Because those that matter... don't mind... And those that mind... don't matter.

very nice.....