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May 19, 2010
By Angel_B GOLD, Summit, Illinois
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Angel_B GOLD, Summit, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
what doesn't kill you makes you strong

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If I have to do it
I’ll do it on my own
I don’t want your help
Please just leave me alone
I want to be by myself
In complete solitude
Where I can hide from my
Fears or a problem or two
I don’t need your advice
Because words I don’t need
I don’t need your help because
Weak I will not be
I will hold my head up high
And swear to you I will not cry
Just go away
And in the silence I will stay
Because I’m going to do it
And it will be on my own

© Becky G., Westville, OH

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i wrote this poem because someone always want to give advice. sometimes people just need others to listen
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This article has 17 comments.

XCLover GOLD said...
on May. 27 2010 at 8:54 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

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I completely agree :). It drives me crazy when people always want me to do it their way. I'd rather do it my way and if I do it wrong, learn from it.
Eowyn BRONZE said...
on May. 27 2010 at 2:53 pm
Eowyn BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
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I can totally relate to this.  Great Job!
TNT25 SILVER said...
on May. 24 2010 at 3:52 pm
TNT25 SILVER, Johnstown, Ohio
9 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just weakness leaving the body"

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pretty good. i like the beginning part a lot.
thewetone said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:34 pm
thewetone, Saugus, Massachusetts
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i like this
manuslice said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:22 pm
manuslice, Saugus, Massachusetts
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oio

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great peom

 

pasquale_f said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:22 pm
pasquale_f, Saugus, Massachusetts
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this was a great poem i really liked it.....
Angel_B GOLD said...
on May. 24 2010 at 7:26 am
Angel_B GOLD, Summit, Illinois
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Thank you. i felt this poem more than wrote it. i wanted something where people would understand that i dont want to be told what to do but just listen or leave me alone. Thank you all for your comments
JoetheBlanc GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 10:08 pm
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
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"the shadow proves the sunshine!"

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this is great! the rhyme scheme is great! i can the flow and ebb or the poem, the coldness of loneliness.
live.create16 GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 10:49 am
live.create16 GOLD, Dedham, Maine
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Far away there in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them, but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them, and try to follow where they lead.
- Louisa May Alcott.

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this is such a beautiful poem!
CrazySquid GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 12:43 am
CrazySquid GOLD, Cashmere, Washington
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"For beauty is nothing but the begining of terror"

Rilke part of 'The Tenth Elgy'

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simply amazing...
DaylightDarkness SILVER said...
on May. 22 2010 at 10:05 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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This is so deep and thoughtful. I completely agree. Thank you so much for posting.
InsaneLooks said...
on May. 22 2010 at 6:18 pm
InsaneLooks, Fresno, California
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so ture, that has to be one of my favorite poems so far.
Vivallaa PLATINUM said...
on May. 22 2010 at 11:07 am
Vivallaa PLATINUM, NYC, New York
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\'Before you stalk and overrun, you can\'t devour anyone.\'

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i can never go to my mom for anything, even though i do. all i hear is what's wrong with me and why it's always my fault. most times i just go to one of my close teachers. she can just listen.
Whisperer PLATINUM said...
on May. 21 2010 at 11:12 pm
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I'm not~Anonymous

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this is really good. i like it and it's exactly what i need to hear. :) thank you for sharing. check out my stuff if you like.
Eilatan GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 8:02 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

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this is very good work. i was expecting the last line to fit in with the rhymescheme, but it's very powerful overall.
Meavescrete SILVER said...
on May. 21 2010 at 6:22 pm
Meavescrete SILVER, Potomac, Maryland
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Totally true. Absolutely loved it.
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM said...
on May. 21 2010 at 4:01 pm
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
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 love this poem, it pulled me in and i really felt it,