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Is This Love

April 18, 2010
By k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra


I think of you all the time
Can't get you out of my head
Thinking about all our wonderful moments
And the beautiful words you've said

But sometimes you aren't always kind
And over your words I weep
At home alone I lay wondering
Why do they cut so deep

Those moments are few and far in between
I yearn for you when we're not together
Cherishing the moments we have to ourselves
O want this to last forever

This feeling is burning inside of me
A feeling I can't contain
I just want you to realize
That this feeling is causing me pain

So put me out oft misery
And give me my very first kiss
Then I'll know you feel it to
And will remember it with such bliss

Hold me close in your arms
And never let me go
"Is this love" is no longer a question
This feeling now I know


The author's comments:
This is about realizing that you love someone. This I dedicate to my first love.

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on Feb. 5 2011 at 12:17 pm
-143_ily. BRONZE, Over The Rainbow,Where The Skittles Are, Georgia
1 article 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
~*You Know You're In Love When You Can't Fall Asleep Because Reality Is Finally Better Than Your Dreams!*~ <3

~If U Want Me 2 Fall For U..... U Gotta Give Me Sumthin' Worth Trippin' Ova! ~

Oh my Gosh! I love ittt! Best one aboutlove on this website girl! I'd loved to hear more causeeeeeee I just tagged this as my favorite.:)

HuntressEmma said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 6:28 pm
AMAZING. <3

on Jul. 12 2010 at 2:20 pm
LaurenJane PLATINUM, Canton, Illinois
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A while back I said I was quite critical on someones page, and you asked me to read your poems. This one has a strong ending, I enjoyed it. Your other work strikes me as extremely sincere, which is a HUGE part of envoking emotion and response from your readers. Nice work!

on Jun. 24 2010 at 1:42 am
beautifulworld SILVER, Memphis, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
What's the point i wearing my favorite rocket ship underpants if no one asks to see them? -Calvin and Hobbes

amazing! I especially know just how this feels right now.

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 15 2010 at 2:57 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

THANK YOU!!! :)

on May. 14 2010 at 11:15 pm
mikaylaquinn GOLD, NewCastle, Pennsylvania
17 articles 7 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
~♥life is your own personal fairy tale, you gotta do what ever you need to do to make it come true!♥~

...wow i soo love this poemm!!

on May. 14 2010 at 9:47 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Thanks that would mean a lot to me <3

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 9:44 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Thank you so much :) I will go and check out your work <3

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 9:42 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

I would love to turn this into a song!!! That's a great idea, i'm going to ask my friend to make me a melody, i'll keep you updated. And thanks <3

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 9:40 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Thank you very much :) I'm glad that you could understand my concept. I will deffinetly check out your poems and leave comments <3

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 9:35 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Thank you :) I'm glad you could relate. <3

Eilatan GOLD said...
on May. 14 2010 at 7:21 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

how sweet...

it must be amazing to love someone that much.

this kind of reminds me of my poem Sidewalk Chalk, or maybe Walk Away- Matrix.

good job again, keep writing!!!


adams said...
on May. 14 2010 at 5:38 pm
Sounds like a love song; I think it would sound beautiful with a simple but pretty melody. The words themselves aren't anything new, necessarily, but it still strikes the heart.

on May. 14 2010 at 3:56 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

WOW I LOVE this! i know exactly how you feel! If you could can u check out my poem? It's called Memories and i would love if you could comment and rate it =D

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 13 2010 at 10:14 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

THANK YOU  :)

 

 


on May. 13 2010 at 6:21 pm
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

ohmiigwdd! beautifull poems hun! great work!

on May. 13 2010 at 3:39 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

I love it! Im going through the same thing at the moment, but its also a little figment of imagination.     Five stars!!! :)

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 10:07 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

Oh I get it now : P

on May. 12 2010 at 7:11 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

Kate and John cuddle each other near the foutain. its their first anniversary. there's a song playing in the back ground. "Hold me close in your arms and never let go. Is this love-is no longer a queston. This feeling now I know." it's the perfect song fot the two of them. (wink,wink)

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 6:28 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

1st anniversary anthem? Haha, you lost me there but thanks for the comment :)