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Birthday Girl
March 21, 2010
Pink frosted cupcakes
Stare at me
With multicolored
Sprinkled eyes
Their soft red hair
Licks the atmosphere
Their mouths
Are crinkled in waxy
Disgust
But
When their hair is blown off
Their lips peeled away
Their eyes licked up
They are delicious
© Carollynn G., Hawthorne, NY
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This article has 2 comments.
JustJanelle BRONZE said...
on Sep. 29 2010 at 10:45 pm
Thank you very much for your compliment and honest opinion! :)
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 29 2010 at 7:09 pm
This is very strange... and very good. I'm glad that you're able to make something so creatively from a boring day and a cupcake. This was really written well. "Their soft red hair/ licks the atmosphere" is a great line. You had a perfect ending.
