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...did you hear?

March 19, 2010
By firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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i don’t believe it.
yeah… I didn’t either. but she SAW them.
he wouldn’t do that. and you know how she lies.
yeah…i’m here if you want to talk about it.

Is it true?
r-r-really true?
the rumors in the hallway,
they eat through her flesh,
gnaw on her soul.
that still hurt.

why would someone do that? why?
teenage girls are cruel, you say.
and i'd have to agree.

but some people take it to far.
revolving around the
eyeliner-mascara-eyeshadow-don’t 4get foundation
harsh words tossed carelessly through glossed lips,
typed and texted instantly by nail polish clad perfectly manicured nails.

she said.
i said.
you said.
who said.

even those with cutesy matching outfits
they have fangs, you know.

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on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:23 pm
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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I love it!! It is so true! I like the part where you talk about revolving around the eyeliner-mascara-eyeshadow part! Check out some of my writings too...i think you will like it. Keep writing!


on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:34 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

I love it. I absolutly love the last 2 lines that "even those with cutesy matching outfits, they have fangs, you know." LOVE IT! Can you rate and comment on some of my stuff? I would love you opinion. :)

on Apr. 1 2010 at 2:31 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
51 articles 6 photos 105 comments
thanks :) i will.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:39 am
This is really good. It’s easy to relate to, and interesting to read. Keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.