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Him </3

March 2, 2010
By RachelAmber BRONZE, Lake Worth, Florida
RachelAmber BRONZE, Lake Worth, Florida
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Im so done with this ,
everything we had of course im gunna miss .
But all the pain you put me through ,
damn dont i feel like a fool .
You really ment something to me ,
but our movie was rated p.g ,
I geuss you were looking for rated R ,
i just wouldent go that far .
You wernt just some guy ,
you really looked fly ,
but i geuss it was a disguse ,
for someone who wouldent care if i'd die .
Yea you cut me deep ,
now i feel incomplete ,
someone who cant compete ,
for someones feelings that are hollow and cheep .
Beaing a cancer ,
you spread fast ,
and my body is'nt willing to last .
Seriosly this time ,
i made up my mind ,
I DONT WANT YOU AS MIND .

The author's comments:
From the broken heart .

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on Sep. 3 2010 at 1:55 pm
Katie_Potatie PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
There are no regrets in my life; because there is no time for mistakes. -(ME) Katie quote

Love Love Love it.
Personal experience? I've been there.

on Mar. 27 2010 at 1:49 pm
RachelAmber BRONZE, Lake Worth, Florida
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whoops

*  I DONT WANT YOU AS MINE .


Milo! said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:33 pm
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