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~Pain~

February 25, 2010
By PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..


Here it is.
This torture,
this hour.
It's horrible
can't you tell?
It is no time to fail.
It will be worse.
All of it!!
It will increase.
It will never cease.
There is no hope,
not in this heart of mine.
The feelings,
they hurt.
Is it a curse??
It won't be lifted
that is not shifted.
No more happiness,
No more love...
No hope above.
It's all over.
The pain is gone,
lifted like a dove.
I an through,
through with the pain.
It's all over...
I'm dead inside.
It's ceased,
and hasn't increased.
It has left me,
left me in pieces!!!



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on Mar. 10 2010 at 2:36 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

woww. very deep. luv it:) awesome job!! plz keep writing!!

on Mar. 10 2010 at 8:42 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

Thanks.... It was one of my first ones... I probably wrote it in 2007 or 2008.... It's old, but yet it's still amazing... one of my many favorites... =)

Milo! said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 8:59 pm
Wow. This is really deep. It's a very good peice.