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February 26, 2010
By abbystartsriots SILVER, Turner, Maine
abbystartsriots SILVER, Turner, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They sicken of the calm who know the storm." (Dorothy Parker)

You're going to
crave my curves,
my words –
steamy, creamy strong
legs, lips-pursed, lashes-batting.
Enough of your flattering.

You will break.

I'm going to make
you work.
Harder, and harder, and harder.
You'll be too
weak to speak.
I'm no sinuous
serpentine girl
to charm into a basket, no
man-made lid, you'll find
will hold the
seductress kind.

From such strength, I may shake.

You're going to
crave me; desire
will burn a hole
through your skin.
You'll want to acquaint
your famished fingers
with every inch of me,
eyes like coal –
I could write a book
about depravity, or
nihilistic sin.

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on Aug. 28 2014 at 10:30 am
takeachanceandlive BRONZE, Paris, Tennessee
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Passion... it lies in all of us. Sleeping, waiting, and though unwanted, unbidden, it will stir, open its jaws, and howl. It speaks to us, guides us... passion rules us all. And we obey. What other choice do we have?" -Angelus (Buffy Vampire Slayer)

Really liked it! It's basically perfect, and the words you used, as well as the structure, flow and fit together perfectly.. Good job.

on Jan. 4 2013 at 1:44 pm
kate_anne PLATINUM, Cedartown, Georgia
41 articles 7 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win.
-Stephen King

I liked it. You used good words that kind role around in your mouth like marbles.

on Mar. 17 2011 at 3:35 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

I actually liked this poem. It has good word flow in my opinion and it was truthful from the reader. No need to be embarresed with anything made from a mind or heart. You feel what you feel and thats just that.

By the way, For this type of poem, i must say, great word choice. I usually don't read poems like these, but im glad this is the one i chose to. It came from a heart, and thats all you need for a poem. A true poet can put themselves in others perspectives as well. :)

on Jan. 4 2011 at 7:35 pm
bahannahpeel PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Schools corrupt the mind." The Loco Focos


Don't be mean. If you're going to tell her her poetry sucks (which it doesn't) at least back it up with some concrete information.

I enjoyed this poem, though it wasn't the best, Something about the flow of words put it off. But I loved it nonetheless

on Jan. 1 2011 at 2:31 pm
justsmileanddance PLATINUM, Montgomery, Alabama
28 articles 42 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
-Albus Dumbledore

this is so good!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:13 pm
LouieLou BRONZE, Lakewood, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments
Ooh I love this.