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The Sounds of Silence

January 24, 2010
By clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
8 articles 1 photo 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty


Floor creaking,
Mice squeaking,
Noises you can hear.
Bats shrieking,
Faucet leaking,
Footfalls coming near.
Branches scratching,
Fear is hatching,
Skin begins to crawl.
Door unlatching,
Breath is catching,
Death isn't far at all.



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on Mar. 13 2010 at 6:04 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
8 articles 1 photo 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

i dont think i've ever needed to say sol... hmm

on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:23 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

yeah. i wasn't actually saying "laugh out loud loud loud loud loud..." that would be retarded .
I learned that there is also SOL, Sob Out Loud. I heard it in "Gives You Hell " by The All American Rejects. Just thought I'd share. (It took me awhile to figure out what it stood for, lol.. or sol)

on Feb. 25 2010 at 5:26 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
8 articles 1 photo 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

haha i wondered about that :P

on Feb. 25 2010 at 5:06 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

I hate when that happens. I also dislike the 10 character rule on comments.. why can't I just say "lol" sometimes?? thats why once I put "lolllllllllll", so it would post.

on Feb. 17 2010 at 5:40 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
8 articles 1 photo 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

wow it posted twice... first it wont post at all, then it posts twice. UGH >.<

on Feb. 17 2010 at 4:50 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

hahaha that's perfect!!

on Feb. 15 2010 at 5:49 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
8 articles 1 photo 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

UGH it wont let me reply to ur comment so I have to start another one...
haha its ok.
i think i should add a few lines that go something like this...
Glass crashing,
Window smashing,
My sister is a retard .
LOL

on Feb. 15 2010 at 5:48 pm
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
8 articles 1 photo 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

haha its ok.
i think i should add a few lines that go something like this...
Glass crashing,
Window smashing,
My sister is a retard .
LOL

on Feb. 15 2010 at 11:25 am
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

Wow, what a jerk. I called your house old. :( I like your house.

on Feb. 14 2010 at 8:56 am
clumsy_one123 SILVER, Brentwood, Tennessee
8 articles 1 photo 170 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All daring starts from within." -Eudora Welty

you've never seen it cause i've never shown it to you.
haha yeah i think i'll add a part that goes something like this:
Glass crashing,
Window Smashing,
My sister is a retard .
LOL

on Feb. 8 2010 at 3:59 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

Cool. When did this one get accepted? I didn't know about it.

Is it the sounds of your old house, or no? (lol. I'm teasing. you would have to mention hearing a girl slamming on the window trying to get the attention of a squirrel too.)