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You chose to lie

January 21, 2010
By freeyourmind PLATINUM, Princeton, Illinois
freeyourmind PLATINUM, Princeton, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can never truly appreciate what's good in life until you have experienced what's bad.


I’ve told you once, I’ve told you twice:

We are done so say your goodbyes.

I told you I would always love you,

To bad I was wrong.


It's over now,

And now we’re done.

You lied just once

But that’s enough

To end it for good.


Please don’t cry

Oh please don’t cry

You had it coming

When you chose to lie


Don’t make this harder than it has to be

Just think back on our history

And tell me if it’s really worth the hassle.


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Howler GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 2:52 am
Howler GOLD, Cerritos, California
17 articles 5 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not abut the number of breaths you take but about the moments that take your breath away"

I so get tis absolutely great!!! check out my forums!

on Mar. 24 2010 at 7:31 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

I think this was great, though not your best. You have improved 110% from then, and this piece was still very good. It had a lot of emotion.

on Feb. 28 2010 at 3:19 pm
beccasara12 BRONZE, Guttenberg, New Jersey
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I really enjoyed this! great job concidering ure age!!!!

on Feb. 12 2010 at 6:56 pm
ChildOfThePast SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Things change. And friends leave. And life doesn’t stop for anybody."

I couln't find your home sweet home :_( lol anyways i love your work, we must chat sometime, if you would be ok with that.

on Feb. 3 2010 at 5:27 pm
ChildOfThePast SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Things change. And friends leave. And life doesn’t stop for anybody."

that was actually pretty good for what age you were :)

on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:26 pm
freeyourmind PLATINUM, Princeton, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can never truly appreciate what's good in life until you have experienced what's bad.

yea i kno its not that good...i wrote it wen i was 13 haha