Venom | Teen Ink


January 16, 2010
By Gatorguy11 BRONZE, Lake Jackson, Texas
Gatorguy11 BRONZE, Lake Jackson, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Ain't no rest for the wicked"


Be the light to guide me home,

Your touch conveys more than words ever could,

I’m reaching for your hand as a safety net.

You were here before and I need you back again,

I drown each second you’re away,

Save me when you can.

You are adored and beloved,

It is impossible for me not to give in,

You have me by the lips.

You lied in wait for me,

You tempted me; I fell for you gladly,

You’re a spider, and I’m caught in your web.

So, take my life, leave me breathless,

You’ve spun my casket - at least,

Sink in your fangs, and give me a kiss worth dying for.

The author's comments:
A "love" I lost, truly not love, but i thought it was at the time

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JackXD SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 2:44 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

i really can relate to the poem and well yes love can be venoumous sometimes i really liked it

check some of my stuff out too i think you would enjoy it

on Jan. 26 2010 at 12:00 am
soccerpsycho49 PLATINUM, Teaneck, New Jersey
37 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who say that sunshine is happiness have never danced in the rain.

what a great piece of writing! its almost like a haiku in its bluntness, but its not because its not those sylables....but ooo i like it....a lot.