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Glass of Love

November 27, 2009
By FizzingWhizbees27 BRONZE, Davis, California
FizzingWhizbees27 BRONZE, Davis, California
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Glass of Love

A glass of my love sits on your table,
And you ignore it
A glass of my love sits on your table,
And it ages
A glass of my love sits on your table,
Begging for you to take a tiny sip.
It’s asking:
Asking for you:
For you to drink it,
To just take one sip
And realize you love me.
The glass falls off the table and spills
On the ground.
You decide you want a taste
Only one drop remains in the glass
It tastes delicious
You ask for more
But there are no free refills.

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on Jun. 28 2011 at 8:51 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This is a great metaphor!  I don't know much about poetry, but I do know this is excellent.  Good job! :)