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The Windowless View of the World Outside

November 9, 2009
By amg73093 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
amg73093 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today."


Cold unearthly water from somewhere not a native to me,
burning and slicing away at the thought of its touch,
and your touch.
Time and time again the endless noise of nothingness sinks into my mind,
letting the inner truth of my life reach its outer limits and escape through my screams of laughter.
No, see the life you watch so dreadfully is not even there,
it hides behind the mask of this worlds elements that portrays onto your face.
Faces covered in scars and lies that are so deep no erasing is possible.
Smile as the glimmering world we so blindly watch,
for it is better than the truth that hides behind the closed door of a mind.


The author's comments:
About life

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tikigurl98 said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 8:53 am
tikigurl98, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Why so Serious?

Your welcome. I think that you have potential. Keep writing!

amg73093 GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2009 at 2:30 pm
amg73093 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
18 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today."

Thank You!!!

tikigurl98 said...
on Dec. 2 2009 at 6:12 pm
tikigurl98, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Why so Serious?

Hey! I just wanted to say that this is really good. Your descriptions are really good. I can kind of imagine this. I really enjoyed reading this poem and your others!